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Fri Aug 1, 2014, 6:26 PM
there are snakes
that hang
in coils from me
vivid red
and green, their mouths
like tiny
dark fanged caverns
black eyes glittering
they see -

they smell
that mother tongue

that they know
i cannot speak

(if you can touch it, you can kill it, you can dream)

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MaryItIs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The last line was superb.<3
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Love the last line, it is bloody beautiful!!!
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Alexeina Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely! :heart:
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Pinkbat5 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So wonderful!
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Awesome!! LOVE IT!!!
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JoePhilliacTheBlack Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
EEE!  This is awesome.
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
amazing :faint:
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awildusernameappears Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Simply beautiful.
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Snakes & Oaklungs,
two of my favourite things.
Beautifully haunting as ever love.
black heart bullet 
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WalkingMadness Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is touchy. Great work!!
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