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Tue Jul 8, 2014, 1:05 PM
the moon shudders;
silver dust lands
in my hair and i sigh,
knock it off -
what's your problem?
i'm frustrated -

i've been trying to
strike a match that won't
light for two hours,
she says
you carry a lighter,
remember?


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Nogumie Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014   Writer
This is awesome. 
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riverwrists Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
this is just.. it feels like a real excerpt like the moon is tangible and close and it's just so mesmerizing ahdbdm
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Kaleidoscopic365 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
But if the moon and her dust is there, why do you need a light?
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Mary5556 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014   Artist
?
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WhisperingWillow19 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*nods* Again, I've had people say similar things to me...late at night when the world sleeps, it's hard not to listen to the things that we don't want to hear. Beautiful, and thank you. 

~Fang
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is probably the only poem I've ever seen you write that didn't have parenthesis at the end. As in:

words words words
more words
blah blah

(insert something meaningful) 
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Argento-Dtw Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, thank you for submitting in :iconarslunae:. Please, be so kind to re-submit in gallery instead of under favourites. It will be accepted!
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rainpeltkitty Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wah your poems are so amazing! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
You need to make a book.
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Student General Artist
That last line.
Holy shit mate,
I love you,
 you're brilliant!
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DoodleDoomed Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoah...
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"You carry a lighter, remember?" I love this one <3
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DoodleDoomed Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I second that.
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Raptorwolf-AML Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icon0u0plz:
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Spacedoqe Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
<3 this one is probably one of my favourites 
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