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Mon Jul 7, 2014, 3:00 PM
i feel in a language
i don't understand,
and the wings of the bird in my kitchen, they
won't get to feel the sky anymore -
and sometimes doesn't it feel good?
to put two fingers round the neck
of a flower and
snap,
hear the petals scream for
their withering limbs,
then start choking

(instinct)

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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, your poems usually have some sort of plot twist and I love how unexpected those are Heart
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
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randomstranger345 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing.
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Pinkbat5 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So sad.. And so amazing.
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ClassicalPoet Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Artist
Gorgeous!!!
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rainpeltkitty Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely amazing!

"i feel in a language
i don't understand"  <-- Love this especially. <3
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XxFlameFrost101xX Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Stunning, just stunning.
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bitteryetsweet Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
I almost thought this was Coldplay!
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Raptorwolf-AML Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How does one poem like this?
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RoboCake2000 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
You have to have lots of knowledge of the English language, and be able to also use those words to express all those annoying little bottled-up feelings, you know?
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Phan5everx2 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Dark, beautiful and really gratifying!!
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Deaths-Lament Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
to take a walk in your mind must be the most beautiful thing on this earth
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Damn.
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student
I love what your thoughts have to say all the time no matter the topic...they're oddly satisfying but you want to hear more, perhaps even listen to them - I want to listen to them, to you - if that makes sense? :aww:
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Oooo!
I love this one,
satisfyingly dark. small heart - black 
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student General Artist
shite... this is good
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Yeah, exactly what's going through my head too.
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