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Sun Jul 6, 2014, 5:19 PM
why do you always
sit like that?
hugging your knees
to your chest all
the time, is there any
particular reason?

i say look, look at the dead,
aren't they beautiful?
asleep and mumbling -

she tells me to stop,
says she thinks i am thinking
too much about death,
but i see the leaves falling
off of their trees day and night,
people off buildings,
the same
-

she smiles, says
the weather is nice
today, and i say
when it happened,
there was no sun, and he
was all grey as rain, as
the smoke
that i breathe


(and the nurse said don't you just wish you could grab that brain in his head, and rip)

Skin by Nobody
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:iconstarryambereyes:
StarryAmberEyes Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing
I sit like this all the time 0uo
but im happy witn life though
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wADr5535 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Thank you.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
why?
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:iconwadr5535:
wADr5535 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
You are incredible.
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XfantagelizzyX Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
woah yass
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SugarBubbles2000 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow! Very nice! Very.. abstract! :clap:
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:iconmieufille:
mieufille Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh. :(
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iamcreepasta Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
This is what i tell myself every morning sadly.
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Tabbyabby101 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student General Artist
woah
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Sakura-Horino Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was amazing and the ending was so unexpected and morbid. I love it. :)
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sunnybunny1199 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconroz-swa:
roz-swa Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
FOUND YOU.
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sunnybunny1199 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
?
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:iconroz-swa:
roz-swa Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
It's just like old times c:<
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sunnybunny1199 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<.<
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:iconroz-swa:
roz-swa Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
>u<
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lovelyincarnadine Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
{ This is truly amazing, my friend. }
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Thunderclan-Cat Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Bloody hell!! This is beautifully complex and deeply soulful. 
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WHATisYOURobsession Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015
I have been watching far too many abridgements lately. All I can hear is Bakura in my head. Reading your comment in his voice. Just took a very beautifully literate comment and made it....abridged in my head. *in Marik ishtar's voice* How god awful of me. For shame, me. For shame. *hangs head*
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hossainx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow ... nice
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Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
=)  
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Fanicom Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
the feels...
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:iconlindabostic:
LindaBostic Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This must be the jar that sez "mild death".
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:iconpikawoo221b:
pikawoo221B Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This whole thing just made me go, Wow, wow, wow. It was incredible.
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mcckaja Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool
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:iconthemidnightwhisp:
TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Such a deep negative emotion in this...

Well done.
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome :happybounce: 
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Raptorwolf-AML Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice!
Why does this seem to be a poem about mental disorders and insanity?
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AnimeversalStudios Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
nice poem if it is?Meiko Honma 'Menma' (Anohana) Emote - Crying 
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this. Great imagery. 
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
"[...]people off buildings, the same-"
Oh.
My.
That is, just-
!!!
Wow. small heart - black 
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EvelynTaliette Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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:icongreyroseofhope:
GreyRoseOfHope Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This poem shows how some people are scared of how others act. But can you really talk about such a common topic too much?
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joeyalphabet Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
nice work. i think it would be better if you eliminated the first 6 lines, though.
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Deaths-Lament Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Jesus christ I love this.

"leaves falling
off of their trees day and night,
people off buildings,
the same"

That is fucking incredible. Actually incredible.
And that brain rip bit, the bold text made me flinch.
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student General Artist
SAME!
Gah! Brilliance!
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