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June 17


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Tue Jun 17, 2014, 2:23 PM
night stalks
through the streets
and tonight
he is collecting -

i lay my bones
on the pavement
evenly spaced, but
i know that he won't
really like this,
my spine whispers,
i think you need
to stand up for yourself -

you bottomless pit
of despair
you're hell
you're small
you're small small
enough to push
into that lake -
i am,
i wonder how much
rain i could fit in my mouth
before it's considered
half full, and
how many branches of the family
i could fell
before it's considered
all dead,
and the black
it starts in the top left
hand corner, i see it when i lay
on my bed,
it splits itself four
the first to my eyes,
my mouth, my hands
then my head
on the metal, i lay
in the bath
i breathe out and i feel
myself sink

(they aren't quite clean enough)

Skin by Nobody
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ReyRay Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So many people try to copy your style, Oaklungs, but I can always tell whether you've written it before looking at the ID.
I hope you know that you've got something so unique here that nobody can replicate it even if they try ^-^
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow! Very powerful!!
rainpeltkitty Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is excellent.  Wonderfully dark. Keep up the good work. :)
Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very dark, very good, but I have to say that I'm curious as to what your demons look like...
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
i'll let you know.
Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
randompasserbyer Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Probably one of the darkest I've seen you write! It's superb, though! It- It- AUGH!! No words! X_X
mcckaja Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Dark but very emotional <3
Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
WOW!! I REALLY like this. It Is dark, deep and bloody awesome!!!!
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