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Wed Jun 11, 2014, 12:27 PM
the world's a stage
but he says
please,
don't make a scene


(it's growing boring)

Skin by Nobody
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TheCat101 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

the world’s a stage

but he says

please,

play your part

but what if i don’t

know what i’m meant to be


even the ensemble can find

their place right

in the background

he says please,

don’t make a scene

--
I have some experience with the acting world, so I thought up a longer spin on this poem (I really love this poem for its simplicity and truth Clap ).

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deli73123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow.
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OhMyGoshCHEESE Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
In love with this one~
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nyroc238 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Whoa.
I'm speechless.
You made me forget my lines
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow -- this one packs a serious punch.
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
beauty...deep...
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FruitnCreme Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
having to be told to shut up so someone else could save face... .p.
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CakeHoarder Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I KNOW THIS SO MUCH.

"Don't make a scene!"
"You're making a bigger scene by telling me not to make a scene!"

That's usually how it goes :T
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Unfortunately.
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CindaquilsCreations Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for sharing your wonderful work. <3
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Jebzuz Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's times like these that I sit down and realise who my Senpai's are! @_@;;
And you're defiantly one of them!! <33~~`
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Love it!!!!
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Oldsoul-Mira Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student General Artist
omg it's Shakespeare!!!!!! yayyyyy!!!!! *dies*
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AcidSpades Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
This one hits home man. I love all your poems
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DieterAK94 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm usually a talkative guy with something to say. But pieces like this just make me shut up and think :)
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sairey Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<33333 *so in love with you if you haven't figured out yet*
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
:heart::heart:
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SozoNoTeki-N Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
This... wow, I didn't think so few words could speak to me so powerfully the way this is speaking to me. As mcckaja said, your poems have such a senseless tone but they identify with us on a completely different level. So enticing. Well done.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE THIS. Although, I do think the lone in ( ) may not be needed! :) your choice though!
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LisaEide Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this one!
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mcckaja Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like how you make your poems soud so senseless but they DO MAKE SENSE!!!! That is a talent,mate!
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