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Wed Jun 11, 2014, 12:27 PM
the world's a stage
but he says
please,
don't make a scene


(it's growing boring)

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TheCat101 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

the world’s a stage

but he says

please,

play your part

but what if i don’t

know what i’m meant to be


even the ensemble can find

their place right

in the background

he says please,

don’t make a scene

--
I have some experience with the acting world, so I thought up a longer spin on this poem (I really love this poem for its simplicity and truth Clap ).

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deli73123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.
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OhMyGoshCHEESE Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
In love with this one~
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nyroc238 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Whoa.
I'm speechless.
You made me forget my lines
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow -- this one packs a serious punch.
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
beauty...deep...
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FruitnCreme Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
having to be told to shut up so someone else could save face... .p.
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CakeHoarder Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I KNOW THIS SO MUCH.

"Don't make a scene!"
"You're making a bigger scene by telling me not to make a scene!"

That's usually how it goes :T
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Unfortunately.
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CindaquilsCreations Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for sharing your wonderful work. <3
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