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Wed May 28, 2014, 3:26 PM
slicing open
the tips of my fingers,
four in one stroke
then the thumb

a little flesh hat
for the spirit in each

(love is dead, lilith)

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JoePhilliacTheBlack Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I love the way this flows!
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well damn.
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anila73 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is like on the edge of creepypasta tbh
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student General Artist
Hauntingly beautiful,
you need to be famous.
Seriously oaklungs, you should be super famous.
<3
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QueenTiara Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student
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I like how your poem alludes to the mother of the succubus when referring to love. It adds a fine touch to the end ^u^
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