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Wed May 21, 2014, 5:27 PM
the sea
boiled itself
clean and
holy again,
bones washed
up on the
shore,
smooth as
driftwood

i lay in
the ribs
of a whale
a while,
carve my
name in the
white
with sharp
flint

(in the corners of sand, dug my feet in)


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sairey Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhh, ahh. <33 In love~
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Cynder423 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I could ramble for quite awhile about this, but I suppose I should just say this to sum it all up-
Awesomeness
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bareHa Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
'i lay in 
the ribs
of a whale
a while, '
is perfect.
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mcckaja Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
<3
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QueenTiara Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student
~sigh~ The poems you write... I'd like to peek inside that brain of yours a little bit, just to see where a thing like this comes from...
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Can I peek too?! :3
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anila73 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
1. yes.
2. i want to drown in this poem
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
float on the surface
a while,
a starfish
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Beautiful!!
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BlueKitten22 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Pretty
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