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Tue May 13, 2014, 7:52 PM
there are a million different worlds
that have been built on top of this one,  
and i know this cause they whisper through
the cracks of doors in secret
to each other -
i heard you're never more than six feet
from a rat, eight from a spider and
seventy from the sea, please, don't let
yourself drift any further out from me

(holy ghost, are you flammable?)

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sairey Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"i heard you're never more than six feet 
from a rat, eight from a spider and 
seventy from the sea"

I thought that was gorgeous. <3
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randompasserbyer Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I did too. ^_^
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CrystalHeartz6 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student General Artist
another great piece by Oaklungs! :D
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MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HOLY CRAP RATS AND SPIDERS!
IS THERE AN ESCAPE?
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
There are world built atop each other, waiting for us to discover them all.
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Xetanai Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
I'm not a fan of poetry, but you earn my interest. Watching.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
thank you so much! :thanks:
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Xetanai Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Keep up the awesome work!
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megsmad Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
xx love you
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Professional
you have such a way with words, a real talent.
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