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Thu May 8, 2014, 6:50 PM
you've
tied a knot
at the
end of your
bloodline,
you wish
she'd stop
cutting
it off,
you are
fifteen and
the earth
in
your head
becomes
barren -
life will
not be
weeding it's
way into
you,
now you're
not sure
what
you're writing
about,
you just
know that
you need
to write

(there's a fish with a hook in it's eye, screaming no, this isn't how it's supposed to go)

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Ripplingwaves Featured By Owner 13 hours ago
Rings so true it's almost frightening

You just put all the insubstantial into poetry Heart 
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xLittleblankett Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant once again
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HastyMage Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this means everything to me, with what I am going through right now. thank you
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oaklungs Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
i hope that you're okay, hang in there :huggle:
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PonyUniverse Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...ohh
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CutieStormKin Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed o.o
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Shirouyumi81 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Aaaammmmmaaaaaaazzzzzziiiiinnngg!! 
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ScarletFeather112 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 (O.O)
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   | |          umm... okay.  RATING: Favorites Icon 3DFavorites Icon 3DFavorites Icon 3DFavorites Icon 3DFavorites Icon 3D
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shadowstormcat Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
uh...... okay..... BUT I LUV IT STILL !!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart: heart: 5 stars for it !!! lol :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: 
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Pereyga Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the ending :)
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Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Eh.....ah.....I'm confused but love it.
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mcckaja Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heart I know how you feel..awful..it will get better amazing poem by the way
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innoctemn Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
:heart:
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SilentxoxScramer Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You just described my life at fifteen perfectly. I'm in awe. Amazing job! 
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MalkFox Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm sorry you feel this way at the moment :heart:
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failings Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this one really hits home for some reason
beautiful
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House03 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really beautiful - but the fact that it's a journal is worrying me.
Are you okay?
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MamaELM Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
Most of their longer literature is in journals instead of submissions.
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House03 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, all right. Thanks for the info!
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Simple-Pianist Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
Honestly, I'm so glad I get to see awesome poems like this so often!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. :heart:
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SurrealNacre Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing to the max
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