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Sat May 3, 2014, 3:52 PM
between the clouds
she says your eyes are melting
black down your cheeks again,
would you just come
here and stop bucking with fear,
did you forget
the only thing growing inside me
is panic -
enough for me to keep
veins as vipers, blood as
venom and love as a dead
stiff rat

(some only see the light when they're on fire)

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princessmichaela Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
beautiful. I love it
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SoraLove Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful. :hug:
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goodiesbasket Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Professional Writer
"the only thing growing inside me" is she pregnant?
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this feel though
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"some only see the light when they're on fire"...Yeah. Love the dark humor in this. Simple words, beautiful imagery.
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mcckaja Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your imaginaton..wow..just wow..Beautiful *Q*
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inufufujesukristi Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"...would you just come her and stop bucking with fear..." Lovely, just lovely. :...(
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow, the sssimiles and metaphorsss to sssnakes.
Jussst lovely ;D <3
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh snap. That last line there. xD 
:3 Epic.
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indig0s Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
It's amazing how you can create such imagery and describe feelings so honestly and powerfully with it, it never fails to blow me away and I look forward to your poetry whenever I log onto dA (:
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