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Tue Apr 29, 2014, 4:05 PM
twenty three nightmares of being
on the operating table,
my surgeon mumbles something about getting right
to the heart of things, i might feel a little sting not unlike
that one i got on my wrist when i was
younger, but no, that's not working,
would it be okay if he were
to dig a little deeper? -

something crawls up and over the edge of
the bed, yes she did cartwheels
at the crematorium because
sadness was never that much fun anyway
and to be honest it was cold and a little too quiet
inside, there was no need to kiss her
on the forehead again
- and if you bump
into the evil, sister, come and let
me know -

about how i wanted to
slip through that crack in the pier and smash through the
stained glass surface of the sea,
shatter and curl up on a pew with the eels below
and simply flounder, watch the world from
underwater, grow some
coral,
i'm not really sure why it's that big a deal
if i'm sick -

of writing
this is my body and
this is my love


(the problem is)

Skin by Nobody
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SoraLove Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Great poem, I love the way you write! I know I said it before but it's true! XD
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Personghost Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Writer
You put this feeling into words 
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mcckaja Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love Hug 
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AerithEchidna4rt Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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wei-en Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
///wraps you in my arms
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student
The urge to hug you right now for writing another poem with so many feels, it's strong in this one. I'm not too sure how you'd react though... bleh, screw it! :tighthug:
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Ahh, so much content here, so much to ponder!
Lovely work as ever dear, hope everything is fine with you <3
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nyroc238 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Amazing as always 
And if you're sick of writing there isn't much we readers can do about it, I suppose; whatever you feel like. We would miss you, though.
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DeviantArtist14 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your poetry always makes me think, always makes me wonder. very nice job :clap:
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XxAlleyxCatxX Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Somtimes my brain cannot regaster how talented you are. <3 
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