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Sun Apr 20, 2014, 10:57 PM
i often ask myself questions
and answer them too,
maybe tell your
kids this,
that i'm the wolf in the woods, i just
saw red and couldn't help it, what
can i say i've got a
temper, i couldn't wait
to grip her neck inside
my jaws n shake it, snap
it clean, cracked like a twig,
you see she was a bitch she was a
whore, she had it
coming, with her
sweet laugh and her lips, her
swaying hips inside, she carried
a rifle in her cloak, she wanted
my pelt for the angry winter,
and her old gran? i sucked
the meat from
her lame ribs like she'd have done
the same to mine, i licked my
chops and got in
bed,
had good sweet dreams until
that axe man, that old drunk,
who thought he had some bigger balls
came stumbling in through her front
door,
they found his guts
on the hall floor,
and i can still
smell it a
mile
off -
but what i'm saying
kids, the moral is,
there's nothing little bout the amount
of red you're gonna see in
life, it's all about whether or not
you've got the stones
to fucking stomach it

(don't open up to no one)

Skin by Nobody
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:iconghost-of-a-gone-bird:
this is fucking awesome!
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely take on such a classic tale. Also, I find predators fascinating.
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wicked. ;)
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Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
True, red is such an... interesting colour. I always preferred the wolf anyways,(never did care for dear Red) this just made it better  
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Amenarae Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this more aggressive writing, and the vivid imagery with it.
Stunning and brutal.
But I always have preferred the predator...
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UltimateGreaterGood Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAAAAAAAAA. That was so good. Favouriting this to read it repeatedly. 
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Sokalo Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is so painfully aggressive that it took me by surprise. This, along with the rest of your work, is truly inspiring. 
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Bobbytweak Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
So good, utrolig!
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So...your writing's brilliant, but is all this a reflection of how you're feeling?
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anila73 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
are you okay
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