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Thu Apr 3, 2014, 6:00 PM
i want to scrape
the shell off the earth,
try and give birth to
something much
better,
mould it and feed it and let it
set out on its own to be
loved,
and now, bear cub
don't be so
grizzly,
they'll make good
money from mum's
claws and coat,
mount her head on the
wall by your
brothers

(always dreaming of a blind alley, and this is not a poem, just another ball of paper, throw me into the sun i want the last of the heat to be mine)

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Whispersong22 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Throw me into the sun, I want the last of the heat to be mine."
There's something about that phrase..
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marclene Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The bear cub has found his way out today and the world cruel to him he cries and wines when he grows up he will be the alpha and when the puny humans see him the shriek in terror for he is the papa and he will never back down for his mothers sake.  
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DRA3X Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
it's like your writing about how the world is collapsing
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
"and now, now bear cub
dont be so
grizzly,"
GAH, I loved that!
Perfection.
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xXNamaste Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know right, gave me the willies.
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student General Artist
(n,n)
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: :heart:
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MaryItIs Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Double fave :heart: 
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor bear cub qq
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PaleAuthor Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful <3
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Biasanti Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
how do you even.... this is amazing..
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bareHa Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Wanting the last heat of the day, wonderful
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goodiesbasket Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Professional Writer
Kermityay 
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FruitnCreme Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
the part about the bears.. ;-;
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student
I have no words that could possibly talk about yours in such a manner. Yet here's a comment. These lines made me feel better.
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Alexwiser Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your work has an atmosphere; you cannot help but love it
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xXInSaNiTYArtWorkXx Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Absolutely beautiful. You're one of my biggest inspirations. You're why I gained back my dream of becoming a poet. Keep up the amazing work <3
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