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Mon Mar 31, 2014, 3:42 PM
there is
something
about
how you can make
all the animals
part themselves
with one wave of
your
hand,
make them open
their throats and
speak

and i think i will
find you sticking pins
through the webbing
of a bat's wing,

cross legged in
the garden with
the snake around
my neck,
that's how i'd like
to go

(the world will shift, a heart will break away from it's chest, tectonic)

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babycell8 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
JESUS bless u praying for you go to church tomorow
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boundtoyouforever Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014

death
in the garden of Eden
bleeds a scent
of sweet revenge

I love your writings
your emotions
agreed
no one needs to
understand

thank you
for sharing them~♥


but charlotte

if
I were to pin
the wings of a bat
surely
my hope would be
to give him in flight
in the afterlife 

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SoraLove Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:heart: :heart: :heart: I adore this one! It made me look over it a few times and in each one I found new meanings! :tighthug:
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And there is magic and chimeras in your writing.
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Pokepower888 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Roar, lions, roar 
make me smile
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sugomon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of conformity... and how it's all just going to kill us in the end.

Reminds me of asking: "Humanity, is this really the right path?"

Reminds me of the fear of thinking: "Do I really want to be a target?"
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jeanclaire Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014   General Artist
absolutely divine!! and sometimes I love the comments as much as your words - today especially Nod Xx
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Seventh-heavens Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's about a persons ability to manipulate people and how they constantly put them down, never letting succeed and ‘fly away’.

Then, they hang themselves in the gardeñ.
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Kiwikku Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I'm sorry, I really just dont get it..
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
same here
but there still is something about this piece ...
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HetaliaHonda Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student
Not getting it is sometimes the point.
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
same here
but there still is something about this piece ...
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
you don't have to.
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly. 
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Kiwikku Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I wish I could though. 
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Pigeon-Butt Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Mesmerizing ;w;
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