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Fri Mar 21, 2014, 5:22 PM
i can almost hear
the sound
of everything -
foxes
weeping
on the bodies
of rabbits, i
did not mean
to, i did not
mean -

howling and
howling,
the deer in
the headlights saying
i told you so

(and do you hear that? that's the sound of it all caving in)

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blubbityblub Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
YOU JUST BLOW MY MIND WITH YOUR POETRY LIKE WOW I COME BACK ON THIS SITE AFTER 1000 YEARS AND THIS IS THE FIRST THING I READY AND WOW
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tardisonameter Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student Artist
This sings to me like I've heard it before...
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randompasserbyer Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your poems... I don't know how, but they speak to me. It, like, draws me in!:eagerpee: 
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pikawoo221B Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was so beautiful in a chilling, haunting way.
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
So sad and amazing. I like how you add the extra lines at the end of your poems they always add a new dimension and meaning! 
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Qeeeeep Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
People say this is beautiful but how is killing screaming and dead animals beautiful? It's just deep :p
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chemicalkid101 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
In the theme of "stay beautiful. Keep it ugly", not everything "beautiful" has to be pure and clean. I love this piece because it takes something dark and true and shows it for what it is, but in a beautifully worded way :)
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Qeeeeep Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
But the question is "to be or not to be"
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Jimukay Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL, the sound of road kill XD
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the-Way-curse Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your words are so beautiful.  I can't even.
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TheLittlestOwl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful.  Truly beautiful.
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Such beauty. This makes my heart hurt just a little.
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing :heart: 
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lealsfeels Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is a fantastic piece. 
Thank you so much for sharing.  
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GopherGreg Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student General Artist
this is amazing
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JoePhilliacTheBlack Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
The last line is wonderful!
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marlboroblacks Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this makes my soul ache for whatever reason...
everything you write is so beautiful and eloquent. 
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PatheticPoltergeist Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student General Artist
everything is so loud
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prettyprincess45 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student Photographer
You are so good
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Nico-Di-Angelo-fan Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
C'est magnifique!
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Student
It's almost a shame some cannot control the animal within them.
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ContinentImpostor Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
♥ Adore this
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MagicBirdie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great, as always :D
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