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Tue Mar 18, 2014, 3:37 PM
i don't believe
that if you can dream it
you can do it,
cos i once dreamt that
i killed atlas,
i tore him limb from limb and then
i stabbed the globe he held,
watched it
deflate,
and sometimes i get sad
about the children in the world
who will choke on all the words
that they'll never learn to speak,
and there's a baby somewhere gargling
the meaning of his life,
and he's a little bit upset that you
keep wiping it
away

(i have no words for you)

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6gunSally Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheart3dplz:
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Ch1biKuro Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
I dreamt it and did it in my dreams o-o dose that count? :3
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kmills95 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i dont know where you get your ideas or inspiration but i always love reading your work.
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PhoenixFlamesRising Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
"and there's a baby somewhere gargling
the meaning of his life,
and he's a little bit upset that you
keep wiping it
away"

The spittle of wisdom? Seriously, though, GREAT poem!
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Inevitably-dead Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So beautiful and captivating.
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WestlyLaFleur Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
This stings like purpose.
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DRA3X Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Student General Artist
i love the way you animate a story with mere words
hghhhhsdghmjd i love your work so so much
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lecafenoir Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This is EXACTLY how I feel. You're talented.
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wxnderlust Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Blown away, brilliant once again
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Professional
Great imagery.
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anila73 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah.



yeah.
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Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the baby one, it really makes you think...
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love the last image, with the baby. Wonderful.
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Deaths-Lament Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You have the most glorious mind :heart:
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Devonator4 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's quite a dream you had.
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Blown away by this imagery you weave.
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