Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconoaklungs: More from oaklungs


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
March 16
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
2,334
Favourites
192 (who?)
Comments
26
×

.

Sun Mar 16, 2014, 7:18 PM
and god-
i saw the moon
leaking into the sea,
a great big silvery slick
on the waves

and as i held my hands up
to the hole in her side,
she smiled and soaked
into me

(gentle, gentle, she doesn't have long)

Skin by Nobody
Add a Comment:
 
:iconflummo:
flummo Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Writer
oh my god, this. what an image.
Reply
:icontylerp1991:
tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
vlVld
Reply
:iconeverydaybattman:
EverydayBattman Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.
Reply
:iconthemoonofmyheart:
Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Tender and beautiful :) 
Reply
:iconenchantressofnight:
enchantressofnight Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
lovely imagery.
Reply
:iconmarbearcarebear:
marbearcarebear Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
how do you do this? do you sit down and think, "hey, i'm going to make beautiful thoughts today" or do you just ooze deepness?
Reply
:iconreireiserenade:
ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
gorgeous! :heart: :clap:
Reply
:iconstormsandswallows:
StormsAndSwallows Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student General Artist
the use of parentheses at the ending of your writing just ties the pieces together in an amazing way
Reply
:iconfableweaver55:
fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful imagery. It reminds me of that song "You Are The Moon" by The Hush Sound: www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-giyj…
Reply
:iconthemoonofmyheart:
Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know of this song :) one of my dear friends :iconqueen-of-beers: had shared it with me...thanks for reminding it here 
Reply
Add a Comment: