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Sun Mar 16, 2014, 7:18 PM
and god-
i saw the moon
leaking into the sea,
a great big silvery slick
on the waves

and as i held my hands up
to the hole in her side,
she smiled and soaked
into me

(gentle, gentle, she doesn't have long)

Skin by Nobody
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flummo Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Writer
oh my god, this. what an image.
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tylerp1991 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
vlVld
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EverydayBattman Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Tender and beautiful :) 
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enchantressofnight Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
lovely imagery.
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marbearcarebear Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
how do you do this? do you sit down and think, "hey, i'm going to make beautiful thoughts today" or do you just ooze deepness?
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ReiReiSerenade Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
gorgeous! :heart: :clap:
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StormsAndSwallows Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student General Artist
the use of parentheses at the ending of your writing just ties the pieces together in an amazing way
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful imagery. It reminds me of that song "You Are The Moon" by The Hush Sound: www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-giyj…
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know of this song :) one of my dear friends :iconqueen-of-beers: had shared it with me...thanks for reminding it here 
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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JoePhilliacTheBlack Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Oooh, this is lovely.
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thebookofnights Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Professional Writer
I wish I could add your entire stash of poems to my favorites.
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bareHa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
So beautiful
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Math-Mage Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
I love the imagery of the first paragraph, but I don't understand the second paragraph. :(
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Bruzzy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
It's poetry, think about it and interoperate it which ever way YOU feel! ;)

BTW, how did you do this? like the text etc. 
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Pigeon-Butt Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Stunning ❤
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sugomon Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. :heart:
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Inevitably-dead Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Breathtaking. The more I read it, the more meaning it has <3
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search-the-stars Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
oh, I teared up. It's beautiful.
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student
This seems different than the works you've done recently.
It's more soothing, yet hasn't lost any of your signature elegance.
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4L3KS Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
... oh my gosh
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. (':
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halierae Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
God... I just... Yes
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