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Fri Mar 14, 2014, 5:46 PM
someone told the mist
it clings too tightly
to the hills
and someone told the snow
that the mountains need
to breathe

(an idiot, a coward)

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lecafenoir Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
you are incredible. as simple as that. i love the things you write, so emotional.
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sarah2231 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love this! 
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's short, but it says so much. I love it
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The text in the brackets really adds something to it
I like it
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SonicSaturn Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful :)
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How can such affection go unrequited? A perfect embodiment of the old fear, very tender and beautiful. Great work!
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Mew-Suika Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful :meow: Very symbolic.



(on a side note; who else is incredibly fed up with the keyboard-slap usernames spamming everyone's lovely art?)
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Tassadar723 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Gorgeous. Thank you.
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Username353 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
This is a wonderful and introspective tidbit~ Ugh, too bad about the stupid spammers below. :iconfacepalmplz:
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aquagirl28 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i like this, it's beautiful. 
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goodiesbasket Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Writer
jawdrop, i feel owned
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mountains that the rain it needs to fall. Nice work
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And someone told the m
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The mist can't help itself and the snow doesn't control where it falls.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. I saw it as hopeful, though, until the last parenthetical comment. :heart:
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This remind me a lot of the piece that first got me interested in your work! (This one)

So naturally, I love it. :heart:
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your writing is so brilliant & this is too. :heart:
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chasingcloudbursts Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student General Artist
This is beautiful, and so relatable. Out of curiosity, how do you decide which poems go into your journal and which get posted as deviations?
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
i think perhaps it's because i feel that it's not REALLY a poem.
i use my journal more as a sort of venting, a dumping ground for things that are floating around in my head.
and if there's something i want to add that doesn't fit in then i'll add it in at the bottom.
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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Another lovely piece~
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