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Mon Mar 10, 2014, 5:14 PM
mother i'm
sorry
and brother
i worry about
you
he's dead
but still living
inside me i
knew this
fresh start
would have
the same
rotten
ending

(gonna build you up nice and bitter)

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:iconwolvesspirits223:
WolvesSpirits223 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
So beautiful... Misuzu Kamio (Niha) [V1] 
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zebra-tattoos Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing. 
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EliratheDinosaur Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amg
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pokemonlegend999 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
so beautiful :bursts into tears:
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Zephy10 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
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Zephy10 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
wow, powerful! :)
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BRAGlNSKI Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
So beautiful.

btw how do you type like that? i know < sup > and other stuff. but how?
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KlRKLAND Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
< tt >

:^J
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:iconbraglnski:
BRAGlNSKI Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
da fuq
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:iconklrkland:
KlRKLAND Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
like this
when u mom com hom and make hte spagheti
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xTarynStormCaster Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
< code > You just type that in c:
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:iconbraglnski:
BRAGlNSKI Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
iii thank you so muchhh ;v;
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:iconxtarynstormcaster:
xTarynStormCaster Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D It used to be < t > for typewriter, but I guess they changed it for some reason o.O
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daniel10alien Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Now you have to use two t's
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GlazedUnicorns Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Makes me stunned how amazing your poetry is.  Heart 
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MaThNeRd12 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. Your poetry is truly fantastic.
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WolvesSpirits223 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
i agree
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MaThNeRd12 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah
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WolvesSpirits223 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
x3
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MaThNeRd12 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3
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WolvesSpirits223 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
:D
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MaThNeRd12 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:meow:
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WolvesSpirits223 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
Llama Emoji-10 (Shy) [V1] Emoji03 
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sugomon Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Weird and unrelated comments on this one...

Another deep and jarring piece. Thank you so much for writing so rawly from the heart. :hug:
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful. Your poems are so sad and deep, they really do inspire me. (':
Thank you for writing these.
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-_-
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Silky-Cotton Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why did you even comment this???
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
remorse
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:iconthemidnightwhisp:
TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
They were just sleepy and were unaware that they were commenting. 
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Mew-Suika Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Best answer ever... :rofl:
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
;)
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Devonator4 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is this based off your life or something?
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:iconmisspuggsley12:
misspuggsley12 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I was thinking the same thing- like a lot of this writing is pretty sad and spiteful
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Considering it's filed under Journals/Personal, certain inferences can be drawn?....
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misspuggsley12 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, so you'd think...
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IsleintheSkye Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
Not always. It's easy to write something that sounds real, and darker themes are sometimes the easiest. Every one has everything inside them, poetry helps you let it out.
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misspuggsley12 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
True, very true..
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