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Sat Mar 1, 2014, 4:49 PM
i remembered
the conversation with the anesthetist,
he said place your thumbs over your eyes
and press gently, and i replied isn't that
lizards?
and no i can't feel my hands but i'm
not really bothered, i will sleep
sleep and sleep, i won't need them,
and please keep an eye on the sea til i
wake, it might pack up its fish and
go travelling, it might leak through
the holes in the earth like a sieve,
all the shipwrecks and sharks will
be homeless

(i don't believe in anything, and that makes me a liar because i believe in that)

Skin by Nobody
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lecafenoir Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I read many of your works and I am thankful. I just felt like reading something good today, I needed it. Thank you. :)
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Writer
I did the thumb thing and I swear to god I saw a friggin creepy ass smile pop up.
Beautiful work as always, but that scared me XD
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful - I especially love the last five lines or so.
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jeanclaire Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014   General Artist
painfully beautiful Huggle! thankyou x
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Confusion. When I press my eyes, I see circular fractals. Designs incomparable to reality.
Do the voices praise you in the darkness? I've heard they don't. Just ask Ian McCormick. A man who survived the attack of 6 box jellyfish while diving. One will kill you. No matter where it hits. If you are not given proper care.

Life.... It's so fragile. I'm still debating what to do with "this" one.
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excuse me, make that 5. The number of grace.
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TheDagmar Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist
the last five lines are so soft and lovely
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AlicesRoses Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
all those people are celebrating you and I'm sitting here, being all confused
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QueenTiara Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student
...Once again, I have no words. Why do your poems always leave me so speechless..?
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anila73 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(the sea, she won't go anywhere without you
she'll wait for you to wake up and she will take you anywhere
she'll wait for your lullabys to fall asleep 
she'll wait for your call to leave anywhere
when you walk on the beach,
the waves will always try to reach you

she needs you, you don't realize,
she is weak and you give her worth)
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