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Thu Feb 27, 2014, 3:33 PM
i will marry the moon
and adopt a son, teach
him not to play with the
hearts of stars
(but he will)

i will bring home a man,
give him hope, hear him
out
and then cough
up his guts
on the floor

(i will end up there anyway, might as well say a prayer whilst i'm down there)

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MissLemons Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
I like your short poems!
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:iconmorticia-lynne:
Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Writer
Gorgeous work as always.
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aWay-with-knives Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I laugh too loud in libraries, but I love this, yo!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
sir, you're fucking amazing
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aWay-with-knives Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
You think you know :P
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Qwertynim Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I like it 
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xAsk-Mudstepx Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I fell nauseous after the last part.
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aWay-with-knives Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student General Artist
You think bad ideas are reasonable, too, don't forget about that.
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xAsk-Mudstepx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excause me? What the hail does that mean?
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aWay-with-knives Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Don't blame it on me ......
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xAsk-Mudstepx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dont blame wat on u? -_- that innocent guy act, im onto you now.
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:iconaway-with-knives:
aWay-with-knives Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I called you on it
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xAsk-Mudstepx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I still dk what u mean.
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MixedSunlight Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
....
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thebookofnights Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Professional Writer
So sad...
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AcidSpades Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
I honestly love you're poems. They're so dark and mysterious. And it's so hard to find the point to them, but it's still so beautiful at the same time. I wish I could write such magnificent poems just like you.
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I swear, you outdo yourself with each piece of writing. When I read your poems, all I can think of is..."I wish I could write like that"
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MaryItIs Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
id like to undertand. plz explain. sounds beautiful. plz? sorry
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Silent--Songbird Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing as always! 
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maironmatos Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
Cool!
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

My my!

I LOVEEEEE your imagery!!

And story^^

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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When we wear our hearts on wrists,
We change into abomination,
Then we tear a part that sits.
He gave for a better condition.
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HeyMyNameIsRemi Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Marry the moon...
How wonderfully tragic.
Never being able to actually show the affection you'd feel from so far away would absolutely break the simple human's heart. Speaking literally, anyway.
( . _ . )
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DragonTygress Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poetry is so raw and straightforward! When I first saw this, I thought that the first stanza was the whole poem, and was really impressed with the imagery used that's simple and beautiful, but carries a lot of meaning. That part could stand well on its own, I think.
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Crocodilesque Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
How? Just how can you write like this?
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imunchoncereal Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
My very question.
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