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Tue Feb 25, 2014, 4:50 PM
in a poem
everything comes
to life, so i write
about you, i write
about you, and i
am still keeping
us alive

(light the path then, lantern eyes, if you know the fucking way out of here)

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xXNamaste Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome <3
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful! Great poem!
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Liamusa1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
I think ther are 29 words
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
are you okay?
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Liamusa1 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
yes
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Liamusa1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014

29


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Liamusa1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
meh
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Stunning, beautiful, simple, amazing :love:
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yruhauntingme Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
There must be some kind of way out of here....
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ChinZaPep Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is absolutely beautiful. Someone posted a comment saying you literally breathe poetry, and I agree with them wholeheartedly. <3333
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slycooperfan Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Writer
I am speechless. You literally breathe poetry. Amazing talent!
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draecana Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You astound me. I believe someone else already said this, but you seem to live and breath poetry, and I'm a bit envious of that(In a good way! In a "let's get back to writing" way!). ;)
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love it~
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous, as always.
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student
I have to say this is one of my more favorite poems from you:D
This ideal has been around for so long, but only now have I seen it with clearcut words. Nicely doneHuggle! 
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful as always, I love how the end has a agressive feel.
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SilentxoxScramer Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If I ever get the balls to get a tattoo, I have no doubt it will be of one of your poems. 
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BlueKitten22 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Getting a tattoo isnt so bad, you can ignore the pain after a few minutes.
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SilentxoxScramer Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah? I have a real needle phobia, to be honest. I imagine it's worth it, though!
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BlueKitten22 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
I know exactly how you feel about needles, but if you want it enough then getting a tattoo wont bother you at all.  I'm not gonna lie and tell you its painless, it does hurt at first but you can ignore the pain after a bit, and actually start thinking about what you want your next tattoo to be :D
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SilentxoxScramer Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe I'll brave through it someday. c: Thank you for your advice! 
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BlueKitten22 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
anytime honey!
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Well said.
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Devonator4 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice!
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I really enjoyed the reference of a poem make something come to life so through this you can try to keep something or someone alive (though I'm not sure if it would really work out this way)
And I also love the text in brackets <3
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DragonTygress Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Anila73 is right: "In a poem everything comes to life, so I write about you" is a BRILLIANT line. Oh my goodness.

I've been wondering; you poetry often has similar themes, so are many of them inspired by your own emotions? Or are some of them just hypothetical?
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
thank you so much :hug:
most of them stem from my own emotions.
a situation i've been in, a place, or a feeling i've had.
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DragonTygress Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Youre welcome!
Oh, I see. :3 thanks for answering (not that you wouldn't)!
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anila73 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
IN A POEM EVERYTHING COMES TO LIFE, SO I WRITE ABOUT YOU
IN A POEM EVERYTHING COMES TO LIFE, SO I WRITE ABOUT YOU
IN A POEM EVERYTHING COMES TO LIFE, SO I WRITE ABOUT YOU

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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
grief is old
grief is ancient and
he knows

he knows me
like the back of his hand
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Totally blown away by this - it's brilliant & totally how I feel! 
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Kayru-Kitsune Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wtf it's like you live and breathe poetry... You have an amazing talent. <3
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Stargyver Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree.....poetry is like a path to a whole other world......and none can reach it except through inspiration...
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