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Thu Feb 20, 2014, 4:38 PM
they all say,
it's a good thing
you fell far
from that tree


and i can't
take another bite;
the pips inside
start screaming

(spit spit spit)

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VanePyroRocker Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Loooooove it.:3 
:3 
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WhyHi Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
the (spit spit spit) was very entertaining.
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Hah. "pip." Not since my brother developed his case of schitzophrenia have I heard that word.

He was going to legally change his name to "Pip Cush" because he thought it sounded cool.

 

If you understand the point I'm getting at and do a little research,

knowing that my brother had no idea what these words meant apart from

one another, you'll make a startling discovery.

 

Putting you one step closer.

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0t4kuC4k3 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dododoooo
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SimxRandycunningham Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist
love this.
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By-flys-a-feather Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you take sayings and change them, it's really cool <3 and I think you meant to say pipes?
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ReubenDeFlash Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Writer
I would say stop writing poetry that hits me right in the feels but I like it too much.
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remeron-nap Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
i was searching for a 'like' button, then remembered this isn't facebook.
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ReubenDeFlash Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Writer
Haha, I mentally 'like' button things all the time.
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remeron-nap Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
utter brilliance yet again.
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