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February 10


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Mon Feb 10, 2014, 8:00 PM
the birds don't sing
anymore, they sigh -
a magpie shouts, i think
it's time you heard this,
god you really are a stupid
girl, if you saw things
from up here you'd understand,
see - some kids they don't
ever hatch, don't mean
that it's your fault, and if
you hold on to the shell of
em you're the one that's gonna
crack - so throw it out yeah
just get rid of it i'll
help you if you want, i'll
scoop it up with one swift
wing, and i won't be
bringing it back

(things might be picture perfect but i much prefer the frame)

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Devonator4 Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice job
anila73 Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
mother nature is cruel.

(and what about cowbirds? they leave their eggs in other birds nests and never come back, because they know the other birds will have no choice but to accept them as their own, even if the other baby birds starve to death and get pushed out of the nest)

(oh wow that reminds me of a book i read once, unwind, which i would describe except you might have already read it?)
i've never read it. i'll check it out, i need new things to read :heart:
danimalGAME Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing (as usual) but what do you expect from a genius such as yourself
;W; your poetry is always so good!!
I love the last line especially! :la:
BrandonLeeRitter Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was a strong believer in planned parenthood when my wife and I were
fornicating...   rather....  "she" was....   I should have seen"that" from the beginning
instead of blindly following my heart based on the circumstances life brought me...

but then again.......

I'm NOT in regret over the children she bore me....   -_-
..........and I can't regret another's changes....

The heart is a strange thing....   One of the greatest scriptures that
ever holds so true.....

Jeremiah 17:9
The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately sick; who can understand it?

...... Amen
danimalGAME Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aWay-with-knives Feb 11, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm in regret over the kids whose experiences cannot compare, to your own

I'm a strong believer in 'chance' associations posing significance, and I have heard of one Brandon Lee who shot himself with a glaregun he didn't think was loaded, or something. How are you going to kill yourself?

- - Daniel Steaart, 4:56am,
BrandonLeeRitter Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
With Love, Peace, Patience, Kindness, Goodness, Gentleness, and Self Control....

......  because I've lost control once.
aWay-with-knives Feb 12, 2014  Student General Artist
I think it happens to the best of us. The run-of-the-mill of us tend not to know how to pick their battles
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