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Sun Feb 2, 2014, 5:15 PM
how am i feeling? well today
i'm a phoenix, doc, here get me
an ash tray i'll show you

and please i just wanna sleep
like lena does, i got a brain
like a ten ton weight

(and i'm still holding what's dead because no one else can carry it, and i can't get into bed until i find somewhere to bury it)

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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heart +fav 
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HastyMage Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so incredibly much, this and all your words. I know that that's not constructive feedback or anything useful like that, but I just wanted you to know. It's all just so real.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
:heart:
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"i got a brain like a ten ton weight"
I absolutely can relate to this line ._.
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Too many thoughts keeping you up?
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
far too many for my head to contain.
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The mind has an unlimited capacity for thought and memory. That would make too much, not a matter of amount, but the anguish the thoughts cause. I hate it when I can't sleep because I start dreaming about the math homework I stayed up way too late trying (and failing) to understand.
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Professional
You should write a novel..you have a great voice and a way of using words.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Letting go is absolutely the hardest thing. :heart:
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ohio-nerd99 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am in love with all your poetry. 

This is so beautiful.
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