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Sun Feb 2, 2014, 5:15 PM
how am i feeling? well today
i'm a phoenix, doc, here get me
an ash tray i'll show you

and please i just wanna sleep
like lena does, i got a brain
like a ten ton weight

(and i'm still holding what's dead because no one else can carry it, and i can't get into bed until i find somewhere to bury it)

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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heart +fav 
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HastyMage Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so incredibly much, this and all your words. I know that that's not constructive feedback or anything useful like that, but I just wanted you to know. It's all just so real.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
:heart:
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"i got a brain like a ten ton weight"
I absolutely can relate to this line ._.
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Too many thoughts keeping you up?
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
far too many for my head to contain.
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The mind has an unlimited capacity for thought and memory. That would make too much, not a matter of amount, but the anguish the thoughts cause. I hate it when I can't sleep because I start dreaming about the math homework I stayed up way too late trying (and failing) to understand.
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Professional
You should write a novel..you have a great voice and a way of using words.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Letting go is absolutely the hardest thing. :heart:
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TheButtOverLord Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am in love with all your poetry. 

This is so beautiful.
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honeycat007 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I like the last part best <3
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imadori-kyosuke Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful!!!! like all the rest!!!! i cant wait to see your next masterpice!!!!!!!!
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IndigoDragon456 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
can i ask a question? how do you write something without it being a journal entry?
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Aphose Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wait no stash is only for journals I guess
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Noxe-ApplePi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I think stash writer is for literature deviations too, I've used it a couple of times and it appears in the gallery
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Aphose Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmm weird I can't figure out how to write anything other than a journal in it
meh, not a big deal though
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Aphose Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
go to submit art > click on "Enter text" (it's right below the "Choose a file to upload" button)
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go to stash > click on "compose in stash writer" (upper right hand corner)
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Nimine54 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can answer that for you. Click on Submit Art under the Submit tab at the top of the screen. Then, under where it says Choose a file to upload, it has two buttons: one saying Select file from Sta.sh, and the other saying Enter text. Click Enter text and type whatever you want.
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry you are having a rough time right now. You have my utmost sincere condolences. I have a therapist as well that I see once a week.
Just so you know, if I start to get on your nerves with my own rants, I won't hold it against you if you want to drop me.

When I was a little boy, I wished that I would be a robot. I never dreamed that it would one day be true.
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