my mind said he was
going out to get some
sanity, don't think he's
coming back because
his things are gone
and now i'm up to my
neck in words that have
snapped cos i twisted
them all too far
(it gets me down so much that it keeps me up at night)
So so beautiful!..
that last line though
yet again you blow my mind (it gets me down so much that it keeps me up at night) that line was the best ive ever heard 10/10
It is funny how full your head can be when your mind is gone.
awesome response to an awesome poem
Optimism can be both amazing and dangerous. (That's what I got from this, anyway.)
oh that is too bad. Kinda funny as well in my weird kind of humour (very very dark usual) .
Still I do understand the feelings of the poem. Amazing how you managed to convey that with so few words.
"(it gets me down so much that it keeps me up at night)"
I miss those nights.
You're back! And just as amazing as ever.