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Wed Jan 29, 2014, 7:25 PM
my mind said he was
going out to get some
sanity, don't think he's
coming back because
his things are gone

and now i'm up to my
neck in words that have
snapped cos i twisted
them all too far

(it gets me down so much that it keeps me up at night)

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simonanutu Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
So so beautiful!..
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anila73 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that last line though
ayyyy
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danimalGAME Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yet again you blow my mind (it gets me down so much that it keeps me up at night) that line was the best ive ever heard 10/10
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tuffhoss Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is funny how full your head can be when your mind is gone.
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danimalGAME Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome response to an awesome poem
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tuffhoss Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you quite kindly. :rose:
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danimalGAME Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm gonna copywrite this phrase because I use it so much but "it's only the truth" that was an amazing responce I would have never thought of myself
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Optimism can be both amazing and dangerous. (That's what I got from this, anyway.)
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

oh that is too bad.  Kinda funny as well in my weird kind of humour (very very dark usual) .

 

Still I do understand the feelings of the poem. Amazing how you managed to convey that with so few words.

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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"(it gets me down so much that it keeps me up at night)"

I miss those nights. :)
Great work.
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