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green children
force themselves
up and out
of their beds -

the sun smiles,
and reaches down
to embrace them
today i am planting;
they will grow with me
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ThaliaAngel91 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014   Traditional Artist
I also have a green heart :)
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UniqueOpal Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Gorgeous imagery
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014   General Artist
Lovely piece. :)
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Amenarae Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is cute~~~
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014   General Artist
awwh :heart:
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themeepynerd Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This made me smile :)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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Artaniss87 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Lovely!!!
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TheGameMasters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student General Artist
And then 
The small children 
Cast in shadow
Sigh as 
Life water 
Graces their leaves.
-Silent Sombody
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Pinkbat5 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful!
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DonnieRotton Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014   Writer
Winter is coming.
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Icyevie Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
It makes me think of the first days after the Winter thaw. It's a pretty poem; simple and sweet.
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x-NightHuntress-x Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw. This is so cute. I love it.
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Gogreengirlkay45 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
Such a very nice poem
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:iconnanushii:
Nanushii Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
oh my, a happy poem? 
Bunny Emoji-77 (Melting) [V4] 
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ward-san Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great pastoral poem.
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peacelovehalstewart Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
like this smile
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so lovely!
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student General Artist
"They will grow with me"
Wow.
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nakaru-san Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
then they burn and die jk


beautiful *^*
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Brilliant
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This makes me think of the spring/summer seasons. :heart:
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
Aw, such a cute poem. 
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FruitnCreme Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
the outdoors is a great thing,isn't it? :)
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FullMoon2012 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes indeed :D
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