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a lie
will murder
a truth
and assume
it's identity

will keep
the body in
the dark
until you
uncover it
or until it confesses
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:iconwdnest:
wdnest Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Professional Writer
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
thank you so much!
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:icontristancody:
TristanCody Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Writer
First verse: truth. 
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:iconthe-lost-hope:
The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Very true and well put. :)
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:iconchristiano2211:
christiano2211 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014   Traditional Artist
truthful words !!! Love The Sunshine 
 
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:iconanila73:
anila73 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it will never confess.
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:iconaquatic-aeronaut:
Aquatic-Aeronaut Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
Fantastic imagery.
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:icon237-indefinitetruth:
237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student General Artist
(n,n)<3
You put goosebumps on my arms, and a squirmy delight opens on my face.
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
True true
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:iconmcckaja:
mcckaja Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LoveHeart 
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:iconappa-appa-away:
appa-appa-away Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: 
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:iconsyinthetic:
syinthetic Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
love it. so true :D
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:iconinvisiperson:
Invisiperson Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's amazing how you can convey such a message through only a few words. :heart:
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:iconblueenkor:
Blueenkor Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
*its
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:iconzephyter0:
Zephyter0 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Professional General Artist
*slowclap*

This is perfect.
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:iconwretchedeegg:
WretchedEegg Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
the truth will always set you free
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:iconmarybalderrama:
MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner May 11, 2014   General Artist
I love this! It is too true. :)
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:iconfruitncreme:
FruitnCreme Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is so darn RIGHT!! i love the way you state what happens with this!it's one of my favorites!!!!:typerhappy: :omgomg: 
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:iconguitargirl200:
guitargirl200 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so in love with your work
you need to write a book or something for real
id buy three million copies <3
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:iconmarinamellon:
MarinaMellon Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
haha I agree with you.. :P all her poetry in one book <3 hmm that book would deserve the best place in my bookcase :D
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:iconguitargirl200:
guitargirl200 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amen! 
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:iconzackarycamp:
zackarycamp Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
I might need to get this framed and mounted on my wall.
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:iconwolfgang627:
Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student General Artist
I believe most of her work deserves so much more than a frame on a wall
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:iconzackarycamp:
zackarycamp Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
I have been reading much of oaklungs work recently, and I love it all; but this piece in particular pierces into my soul.
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:iconasterlia:
Asterlia Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student General Artist
What if her work was transcribed onto wallpaper? It could cover the interior of an entire house. ^^
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:iconwolfgang627:
Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student General Artist
it would cover much more than that; i don't think i would ever leave that house.
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:iconasterlia:
Asterlia Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student General Artist
I barely leave my house now, so I'd be okay with that. ^^;
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:iconwolfgang627:
Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student General Artist
lol
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:iconfruitncreme:
FruitnCreme Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i approve of your appreciation :b
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:iconwolfgang627:
Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student General Artist
thank you. :)
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