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death has a way
of assuring you
that he is your
only friend;

he's the only
one that will
stay with you
whenever you
reach the end
i am back to my sad morbid stuff
and it feels good,
i feel like i've ignored death for too long

(and i haven't posted a poem in a while because i received a few hurtful messages
last week and i'm ashamed to say i let them get inside my head. but now i'm just going to post
whatever the hell i want. and if you don't like it, please lump it, because i do)
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Corpstine Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
Hurtful messages? Must be sprout from jealousy! Don't let those green-eyed monsters drag you down again, you brilliant poet.
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Kangaroodle Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh but this is such a beautiful poem. it strikes a chord in me, for having had to switch schools and friend circles so often, having been forgotten by essentially all those whom I have met, I feel like I will have no one for long, that no one will have me for long. life is a casting off, but death is comforting in its unwavering, immutable eternity. not that I seek it, not that I hope for it, but at the end of my life when there is no one but death and I, it would come as a friend.

this is such a moving poem!
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Igneousdruidess Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student General Artist
this gave me shivers, good ones
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Nellie0224 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Wow. Wow.
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Samandra-Chan Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow....i dont even what to say to that....

i love your poems so muuchhh thouuuugh
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CodeWhitex Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love your poems, your wording and ideas are nothing less than beautiful and perfect. 
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ReubenDeFlash Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Student Writer
Amen to that. Haters gon' hate, but your work is amazing and you should continue. :heart:
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nikan2 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
"a free man thinks of nothing less than death. his meditation is not upon death, but upon life"
(Benedicto Spinoza/ethics in geometrical order/part V)

i'd say, you have not lost the scent of life.
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner May 6, 2014   General Artist
Delightfully morbid. You are such a talent. Always please yourself and don't let anyone bring you down with hurtful messages. It is not worth bothering your head about one bit. :)
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cup-of-galaxies Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
hun, your poems are beautiful, no matter what other people say. please don't let those jerks get you down - i understand its hard, but they don't matter! just ignore them and push onwards. they don't deserve even a second thought from you. :iconluvluvplz:
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