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i've got a few bones
in my closet but they aren't
mine, they don't quite fit
haha
ha
stop giving me yours
i got enough of my own
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:iconchristiano2211:
christiano2211 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014   Traditional Artist

I felt here
a pinch
of the good old
sense of British humor
very good! :lol:


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:iconasecretoutlet:
asecretoutlet Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
For some reason, the meaning of this one is evading me... Would you mind dropping a hint?
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:icongallowxy:
gallowxy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
I don't know if you still are interested, but I think it has to do with the phrase "skeleton in the closet" which refers to someone's secrets that they feel ashamed of/hide away, or just secrets in general. I hope that helped some c:
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:iconasecretoutlet:
asecretoutlet Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
But thanks, that does help!
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:iconasecretoutlet:
asecretoutlet Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
I'm wondering what he meant by "they don't quite fit"?
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:icongallowxy:
gallowxy Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
I'm not sure, but I think she means that they are other peoples secrets? In the authors comments she says "stop giving me yours i got enough of my own." I feel like some her poems don't mean as much when you pull them apart all the way, they're more just a general (amazing) feeling that you get from the words. But I'm glad I could help a bit c:
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:iconasecretoutlet:
asecretoutlet Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
OHHH okay I get it. And well the problem here for me is that I can't get the general meaning without pulling it apart sometimes. I don't think it detracts from the meaning but we all have our preferences :)
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:icongallowxy:
gallowxy Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
Glad I could help <3 and yeah, I can see the positive to that, but as you said I guess it's just preference, since poetry really is different for everyone c:
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UniquelySane Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this. Can't explain why, but I do. Heart
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
thank you :thanks: i'm glad you do :heart:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe you should change closet
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:iconpokepower888:
Pokepower888 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Give 'em away
You'll look bad with
'em, even if they're in
your closet, cause you
don't have a thing
to hide
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
love this
:heart::heart:
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:iconpokepower888:
Pokepower888 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you like it ^^
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anila73 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i can't stop giving them to you, i'm sorry
because i see broken bones on the road when i drive to the lake, and i can't know if they're yours
and i don't want you to live without a bone, so
just to be safe
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MEMartist Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really nice. Clap 
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
:clap: x 1000
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JocastaTheWeird Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of that phrase..."I've got a bone to pick with you."
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fayjan19 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"ha
stop giving me yours
i got enough of my own".........

............

.....................
but my dear have some more
quench those fears
for a few is none
compared to what my closet has done 
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russellcattle Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Be careful not to disturb those bones.  They could be evidence of a crime.

For it is written:

"WHO killed Cock Robin?"
"I," said the Sparrow,
"With my bone narrow,
"I killed Cock Robin!"

(with apologies to Lady Mondegreen)
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:iconclovertmnt:
clovertmnt Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist
always
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:iconemeowrald:
Emeowrald Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
You should see if you can get someone to resize them for you. 
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:iconpaleauthor:
PaleAuthor Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Writer
Okay, I won't give you my bones.
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:icondafy-pk:
Dafy-Pk Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I've got a few bones in my closet too. But I'm a med student :p
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student
Remember: don't ask, don't tell :)
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Turbanator44568 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant I say. Brilliant.
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jmelisio Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist
ahah brilliant XD 
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm going to go and check my closet now... Great poem :) 
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Another, just...
Unngh.
I love you for you work. Really amazing stuff.
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misspuggsley12 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I wish there was a like button for comments
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237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
hahaha, thanks.
And yeah, I hear you. I could've used that on many an occasion myself.
;D
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misspuggsley12 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I know right :la:
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:icon237-indefinitetruth:
237-IndefiniteTruth Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Nod Meow :3 CURSE YOU! 
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HeyMyNameIsRemi Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I second this.
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