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spill
your emotion,
or drown
in it
don't let it
do that to you
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:iconyoung-wild-and-bri:
young-wild-and-bri Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Amazing
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:iconmanmadeoflight:
ManMadeOfLight Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Professional General Artist
love will always lift you higher.



short & 2 the point.

+/-
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:iconmorticia-lynne:
Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Writer
You are truly a master of short poetry, I hope to one day reach your level of skill.
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:iconmeowcchiato:
Meowcchiato Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's such a straightforward and impacting poem of 7 mere words, yet so much is conveyed 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
This has verity, so much so that it makes me smile. I like the robust tone. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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:iconmarinamellon:
MarinaMellon Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it :D
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:iconrain-coats:
rain-coats Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is awesome! :squee: 
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:iconianabelleisak:
IanabelleIsaK Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Brilliant...I :heart: you my dear oaklungs
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
i love you too my dear :blush:
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:iconianabelleisak:
IanabelleIsaK Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
:happybounce:
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:iconeducisillustrationis:
EducisIllustrationis Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Or find a larger container.
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:icontielordkitty:
Tielordkitty Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
But what happens if someone else is killed by it.
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:iconbleuhautbois:
bleuhautbois Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
i love this poem for i strongly relate to it.  definitely what i needed to read today, thank you.
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:iconanila73:
anila73 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i'd rather drown in it than let it poison someone else.
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:iconchinoise56:
chinoise56 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely Brilliant!
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:iconsciroccostorm:
SciroccoStorm Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
wow, very poignant......
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:iconthehappy3:
TheHappy3 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ugh, how I'd love to have that as a tattoo
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:icontheemptychest:
TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Wise advice. 
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:iconrealizingrealitee:
RealizingRealitee Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As always, amazing.
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:iconxtrqs:
XTRQS Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
YES
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:iconmarybalderrama:
MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014   General Artist
Beautiful and so true.
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:iconvindiico:
vindiico Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014   General Artist

or spill it, and then watch yourself drown.
three feet deep.

enough to stand in and keep your head dry, but if

you were to lay down, you'd watch your vision grow blurry then dark.

watch. 

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:iconbravodefeated:
BravoDefeated Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Strong!
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:iconsweet---innocence:
Sweet---Innocence Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
holy crap.... okay, just wow...
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
How do yo do it? You've managed, once again, to put an entire life story into four single rows. You must've lived hundreds of years in a past life, this stuff is thought provoking and amazing! Nice job. 
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:iconkitsunemimichan:
kitsunemimichan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly what i was thinking. Her writing is just beyond words amazing!
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:iconpokepower888:
Pokepower888 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You controlled it 
but let it go 

dive, dive
breathe in
Your demise
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:iconkittydead:
KittyDead Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this. I like this a lot.
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:iconabc321abc111:
abc321abc111 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think I would drown in it
In stead of spilling it on the ones I love
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:iconwhatisyourobsession:
WHATisYOURobsession Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
The ironic part about it is that I was just getting on DA to write a journal to vent, and on the front page I saw this, and knew before I even clicked on it that it would be from, as I now refer to you in my head, "my oaklung". (Literally goes like this: *sees poem on front page, reads it* says "oh I just know that must be written by my oaklungs!" *clicks the poem. sure enough, is one of yours*) Your poetry is, as I said last time I commented, always just what I need right when I need it. I clap for your brilliance!
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MUSLIMANIMELOVER Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's so true .. you have to let your negative both positive feelings or reactions or you will be an emotionless person just as I did
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:icontenshi-no-hane-okami:
Tenshi-no-hane-Okami Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I guess I'm drowning then...
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:iconazrail922:
AzRaIL922 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
wow so deep, 4 rows.
Why is that even on the main site? This is still nothing special...
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, so ignorant. 
It's on the front page, because she's managed to execute her writing in such a way other authors/poets cannot. Her "4 rows" can be left up to interpretation. yes, all poetry does this, but not so skillfully. 
She's not splattering the entire page about how she's feeling, or what she wants, she's posting something that everyone can relate to, in 4 rows. That's why it's so deep. 
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:iconpastyourporchlight:
PastYourPorchlight Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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:iconsquirrelmarination:
SquirrelMarination Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If only I could say this to my friends...
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:iconmistermunkki:
MisterMunkki Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well, it's drowning for me !
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:iconrentintent:
rentintent Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Professional Writer
Truth.
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:iconitsmegaman:
ItsMegaman Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
((Here's an idea
for your well written haikus
Umm.. I forgot it))
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:iconenteringmymind:
enteringmymind Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is so perfect and beautiful, this literally sums me up, wow!! Plus ur gallery is filled with gorgeous writings!!!
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Emotions are what define people as who they are, but sometimes feelings get out of hand. I love your shorter poetry, it's so powerful but with so few words. It also has so many different ways it can be interpreted and often inspires me to write myself. This one especially, I tend to deal with my emotions by writing haha! I could almost imagine some of your shorter poetry appearing on T-shirts or wherever else neat quotes go.
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:iconrikibose:
rikibose Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
true mastery
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:iconemantheawsome13:
Emantheawsome13 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SO POWERFUL!!! O____O
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:iconflamingodancer123:
flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
How true
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Simply-Scarlet Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely excellent top notch advice, appropriate for the front page! Next time I'm in the grocery store and I'm very upset that they don't have the brand of frozen vegetables I want, I will just SPILL THAT EMOTION everywhere, right in the middle of the grocery store.
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:iconklystron2010:
klystron2010 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
or buy
a snorkel
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:iconbreezegale:
breezegale Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
im laughing so hard
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:icontyrannosauruschexmix:
TyrannosaurusChexmix Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are now my hero
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:icongeneral-palladium:
General-Palladium Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014   General Artist
I honestly start hating seeing this stuff on the front page everyday.
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sdayton Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Artist
i get what you're saying.
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