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one day the earth will dim;
the light in the sun will flicker and die,
and the moon will sigh and roll over,
keeping her back to the world

our shadows will say farewell
to our bodies, and go their own
way in the darkness
yeah, dunno
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bitteryetsweet Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
This is kind of awkward to read for some reason. First, The Earth becomes mellow. Then, the sun loses its shine for no reason, and the moon's just like, "WHATEVER", and rolls over to bed or something like that. But nobody cares about the shadows, so they left! D:
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely. Keep writing.
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DragonTygress Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"and the moon will sigh and roll over, / keeping her back to the world"
Lovely personification. :3
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry!!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
thank YOU for taking the time to read it! :tighthug:
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:hug: :heart:
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Foreststone Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful, just simply amazing :lovely: Wow! I don't know what else to say...
Except, that I look up to you as a fellow poet c:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
i love you <3
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Foreststone Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww Bunny Emoji-10 (Loved) [V1]I love you too :iloveyouplz: 
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014   Writer
How ironic. This reminds me of a prophecy that the scientists came up with when the "world was ending" in 2012. They said that Earth is going to have two suns and our shadows will disappear, we will not have shadows. Funny if you ask me...
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