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some people wither
with love;
others bloom
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:iconil-spun-ii:
Il-Spun-II Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
nice structure!
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
Indeed.

I have missed your poetry.

Regards,
John.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
it is good to see you back again :hug:
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014   Writer
Thankyou kindly! :hug:
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:iconkitoria:
Kitoria Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
So true.
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:iconclelius:
Clelius Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
I am one of those who wither with it
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:iconheflein:
heflein Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Yet others compromise and simply blither.
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:iconjadesweetbox:
jadesweetbox Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
A healthy kind love will nurture and help you grow...
if not, then it's definitely not (yet) the right one.
This is short but speaks volumes. 
Great job! :)
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:iconmorticia-lynne:
Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Writer
Seven words, and each one creating an entire world within them. Absalotely marvelous as always.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
thank you so much :tighthug:
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:iconlmaohey:
lmaohey Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wonder which I'll be :?
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
i have every confidence that love will bloom for you, and that you will bloom with it.
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:iconlmaohey:
lmaohey Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you uwu
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:iconlmonlimecat:
LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
yeah...,...,, i cant believe im not the latter..
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:iconlmonlimecat:
LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
my text floats?!?!
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:iconlmaohey:
lmaohey Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry i just had to comment on the WTNV quote and say hella
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:iconlmonlimecat:
LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
y thank you, I think your john pic is hella too
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:iconlmaohey:
lmaohey Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks pal ^_^
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:iconobsidian-chaos:
obsidian-chaos Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Yes. This. 
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
True
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:iconpaigesdisaster:
PaigesDisaster Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why is this on the front page?
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:iconcomsical:
Comsical Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
that was even deeper xD
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:icontheshewolflives:
TheSheWolfLives Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Professional Writer
agreed.
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:iconbelkittykelly:
belkittykelly Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cuz it's awesome?
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:iconchasinglions:
ChasingLions Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
=)
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:iconkeitone:
keitone Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the moment i see your poetry i just know its you.. short, witty and meaningful! ;) 
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:iconstar-bolt-pony:
Star-Bolt-Pony Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Cool!
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:iconprincessediana:
PrincesseDiana Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
It inspires me a fanart xD !
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:iconquarru:
quarru Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is beautiful
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:iconazrail922:
AzRaIL922 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Why this is on the first page? Its nothing special...
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:iconkinmoza:
kinmoza Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
not only is it nothing special but the same poem has been written before lol... i dont think this is STOLEN, just so unoriginal it was copied without noticing xD not their fault its on the front page though, its not like they asked for it i guess
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NeycuuRose1 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i know right? and why are people saying this is cool? its just seven words .-.
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:iconbelkittykelly:
belkittykelly Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Because it has a pretty gorgeous message. You don't need a lot of words to make a mark, I mean...
The Gettysburg Address, spoken after a two-hour speech, is now one of the most important speeches in history. Lincoln was calling both sides together and saying that no matter what happened, the men would lay in peace together on the land. It was less that four hundred words. 
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NeycuuRose1 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
....seven words can make people go gaga. ok.
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JBGamer Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes, people appreciate what is obvious but no one ever manages to say finally being said.  That's my guess.
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:iconsalk32:
salk32 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Wha... This isn't even poetry. I mean, it's a nice sentiment, but it's neither poetry nor anything new/unique.
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:iconstarfire-fox:
StarFire-Fox Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
I think that depends on how you look at it; it's free verse
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:iconzetamale:
ZetaMale Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Yes, but on DeviantArt free verse almost always means prose with linebreaks.
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:icongreendolly:
greendolly Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Lol so true
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sarah2231 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely poetry
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:iconlightfaith0606:
lightfaith0606 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Beautiful. :heart:
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:iconshewhocries:
sheWHOcries Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Writer
Unfortunately, I wither.
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:iconracehorsecharlie:
RacehorseCharlie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so true... I definately wither
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:iconrussellcattle:
russellcattle Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
If from you your True Love shrinks,
   And you want to find out now
Why he does that, what he thinks,
   Ask him, "Wither goest thou?"
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:iconstarfire-fox:
StarFire-Fox Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student General Artist
:heart:
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:iconzetamale:
ZetaMale Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
nice little poem!
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:iconrussellcattle:
russellcattle Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Thank you, but I am surprised you did not groan at the hideous pun:

"Whither goest thou?"   

:)
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:iconzetamale:
ZetaMale Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
There's not pun I couldn't forgive for the perfect meter.
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Lizzardman666 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
:iconhagayplz:
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:iconusamasaeed:
UsamaSaeed Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Been Chenged.
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