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and like a stone at
the bottom of the river
or the sea,
i think life might just be
flowing right past me
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sairey Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Tinsy bit confused here. You're comparing your life to a stone at the bottom of a river, saying it'll flow past you... but the stone doesn't flow, the river does. Confused  
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michi-iyo Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
no, the author is the stone, life is the river that flows right past.
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Okay, okay, got it now. 
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Writer
This has a oddly charming rhyme to it. Gorgeous work as always.
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deadcancoil Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
:heart:
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instantr3action Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
this is fantastic. great job.
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Laura-Loup Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And like a bottle lost
In the fury of the sea
Or the ocean
You feel small, lonely
But your words reach me

<3
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014   Writer
This is quite honest and creative. The message that it holds should inspire many, but as you said:

"i think life might just be
flowing right past me"


Shame how many people experience this and they don't do anything against it...
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deadcancoil Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
Does it matter if one does anything against it or not? .. I mean, Really... truly... in the end... does it change the ending?
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