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some thoughts get so loud that
you cry out for them to leave;
they scatter like birds startled
out of their trees, before landing
again where they were

and after a while,
you just have to
let them sing
it's half past three and i'm
laying in bed and
they don't give a fuck who they shit on
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xsakurakisux Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 ;_;

i don't even know what to say so i'll leave it as that cx
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leyghan Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Fuck yeah!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god yes. This poem.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014   General Artist
i feel them feels :heart:
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SciroccoStorm Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
very poignant
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artbyfieldsofsage Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful ... and very positive.
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing imagery!!
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Writer
I know this feeling all too well, every time I close my eyes I hear everything I don't wanna know over and over and over again until my mind melts away to sleeping.
Gorgeous as always, and I love how such a dark idea is represented by such a 'free' creature as a bird.
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is my favorite I've read of yours so far. :) 
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srinath-ste-v Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah that's a beautiful thought..
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