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everything i hold dear
i hold too tightly;
i am so sorry you were
marked when i had to
let you go
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AnanyaArts Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
the feels...
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RoadToWhatever Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This hits home. Amazing.
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Pokepower888 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My fingerprints are
on yours now;
You have my name
across your heart
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Whes Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god. I can't believe I'm nearly crying. You harness brevity like a whip.
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Whes Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god. ;o;
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AnikaDStewart Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
Ahhhh touched me deep....<3
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Nhoomit Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love everything you write. So witty and to the point.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
thank you so much :thanks::heart:
you really are lovely :blush:
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for creating such amazing words of art :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this sooooo much. Bravo! :)
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i know the feeling. :heart: i love these short pieces...short and such a sweet ache. 
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
help your poetry is perfect teach me your ways
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Well put.
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
perfection. absolute perfection.
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keitone Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I knew it, the moment I saw this on the first page.. I though definitely oaklungs! well expressed! I understand that-> holding too tightly thing :') 
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ImnotamonsterXx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Doesn't everyone hold on :p ,
Doubt they were marked
everything is like washable markers
...in the end-
life moves on or dies.

If you let go it must have not even been love.
Or you let it pass you by (not saying they're the one)
But...
Love is not soothing  by like that always
one day you'll figure that out.
Its cool to feel sorry but some ppl get hurt even more
depending on how you let them go.
When they were convinced you loved them.
And writing it like this or at all some may take it badly.

-by silence is bliss/drake

i.picasion.com/resize76/1d5f5b…
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threedayweekend Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014   Writer
Too bad I'm like water so the tighter you hold the faster I slip away, unmarked, unscathed. 
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. :heart: 
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kidapotato Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful!
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Mialily333 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful, no other words to say, simply beautiful(:
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caliedoll Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
I like it, its short sweet n deep :thumbsup:
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anila73 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(the bruise will go away and then you'll forget me)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
some people are left and refuse to let the bruises leave too.
they are re inflicted again and again, just so they can be reminded that they were ever held in the first place.
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Writer
Stunning work as always, for some reason I thought this of a balloon's string tightly wrapped around a child's hand, leaving a thin scar for their lifetime (though that's probably just my lack of sleep at work XD)
I absolutely love this one though, it's so simple yet so powerful.
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Ask--Gaia134Raver Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This brought me meories..I thought forgotten..But now i see i didn't....
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WolfShadowHiruka Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh geez... brought back some memories i thought I forgot...
apparently not
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LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
I'll be honest when I say that I'm starting to regret it but it's too late to go back now..
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TheSleepingGods Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
:(
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can really relate to this :heart:
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Lexi247 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
Beautiful works, lovely way with words
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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PentiumTwo Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
So much said in so few words.
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Underdog-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:thumbsup:
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Devonator4 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice job
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BlackSheep6 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god, it feels like you took what has been on my mind for a long time and shaped in a few thought very meaningful words. :heart:
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BlackSheep6 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*though 
i'm sorry about the typo, my feels were getting in the way
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GildedFrame Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I don't generally add poetry to my favorites, but I relate to this so much!  You explained what I feel using so few words.
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WilliamDallwitz Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
hah... :)
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ARandomHorseLover Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
This is beautiful.. 
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shep4life Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very good
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Kayru-Kitsune Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I very much like this, particularly the first two lines. I may do a drawing inspired by this, if I can find the time.
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XTRQS Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
Very good.
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DEMONATR1X Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
your poems have so much depth to them; it really leaves the audience thinking because of the usual sense of mystery behind the phrases
keep up the good work!
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