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hell is
the devil's chest,
an empty red cavern
he's simply trying
to fill
he's empty and
nothing will do
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Rai-Laurel Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member
I like the imagery of this. If you've ever played Minecraft, and gone to the Nether in a completely flat world, that is the image this poem created in my mind: Eerie, empty, and very red.

You've made my heart beat a little slower. Nice.
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Hydrogenuine Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member  Writer
There are no words that can express exactly how perfect I find this piece.

Right down to the bloody non-existent title.

There's just no words.
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pokeabubble Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
WOAH. I've never thought about it that way. I like this way of seeing it.
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awildusernameappears Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
Wow, you really have a way with words.
I know you've heard this a million times,
buy her me through, you are amazing.
I really can't express the level of
awe I feel. Your writing, it's...
otherworldly. Amazing.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
this comment means so much to me, like you have no idea :huggle: thank you so much :thanks::heart:
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sairey Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're amazing! :O
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JeffreyRebowlski Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful in its simplicity. 
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autumn-spirit Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
you're so clever and amazing :D
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lucidsleepwalk Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Writer
oh my god, this is so poignant in such few words
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TheMidnightWhisp Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(': I love this very much. It is quite sad and has a wicked twist to it that makes you have to think for a moment.

You, my friend, are a legend. 
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