Wow, you really have a way with words. I know you've heard this a million times, buy her me through, you are amazing. I really can't express the level of awe I feel. Your writing, it's... otherworldly. Amazing.
Makes you feel sad for him... makes you want more people to go to hell... makes you feel okay when you tell people to go to hell... Maybe not that far But it really does put a new perspective on what hell is considered and who the devil is! Great writing (as always)!
in hell there is total darkness no light at all fire that cannot be seen
beast that have power to torment you like a scorpion
many other torments you'll see the times you were witnessed to of the Lord and you turn him down
you'll see the people of GOD in heaven at peace with GOD forever
and you may see some one you loved so dear in hell being tormented and they may see you and cry for you to help them
you won't be able to help
and the devil will be there and he will say to you "I have to come hear this place was made for me but you didn't have to come here if you have gotten saved but you didn't and now your here with me forever" and why would you want to go thru that? you don't have to because Jesus made a way to heaven thru his blood
When I read this, I read 'chest' as the one for torso, giving a feel that he's depressed and his heart is a void. Stunning and gorgeous work, I beleive this ranks third in my top favorites of your work from the sheer unique and relatability of this (not to mention thought-provoking nature)
You need therapy if you get hysterical over this, darling. Or perhaps surgery to remove your head from her arse. Seriously, it's nice that you like it, nice that you're a fan- I like this one poem too. But why on earth go so dramatic and zealous? CRINGE!!!!!
OOOOOH well thank you for your opinion I din't ask for. Just so you know, I don't need therapy. It's okay to love the shit out of things, be that poems or anything. It is also okay to express your feelings about things. You know, it actually MAKES PEOPLE HAPPY, both those who write it and those who recieve it so WHY ON EARTH would you go and say there's something wrong with me for making myself and others happy?!
Please do continue cringing if that makes you happy just don't fucking rain on my parade for no good reason whatsoever, okay? Thanks.
thank you. at least now I know it's not just me thinking what PseudonymLizzieDeLov wrote is absolutely unnecessarily rude and awful. I mean, for all I know it could be just my altered sick perception, drama and need for therapy making me think so... -.-
I just can't understand why is it so wrong if people are enthusiastic, even if it's overly-enthusiastic. Even if it's disgustinly enthusiastic. Isn't that better than seeing sad, bummed people?! Christ. *rolls eyes*