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you were a passing
storm, a tornado scribbling
your name in the sand
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Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Writer
i absolutely love this! tornados subtly personified - such a vibrant image.
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
I adore this! :) 
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful work as always, I am just in love with the last sentence.
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xXInSaNiTYArtWorkXx Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Is this tryin to stay that you should "Make your mark on the world" or am I just a complete dummy and interpreting it wrong?
OR
Maybe you want us to simply interpret it our own way and use it to our advantage? :o
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Tornado-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I AM the tornado............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................PINGAS!! :icontrollfaceplz:
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Nestharon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014   Writer
The concept is inspiring.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
:thanks:
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: luckily the waves will smooth it over again, in time. 
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cherrypie04 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I love your comment. Thank you <3
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh, well thank YOU :) 
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snowysylva Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel as though likening someone to a storm is something that can be done oft, but humanizing the storm in such a way is unique, to me. I really like it. 
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LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
I like what :icondirewolfwere: said, about scribbling and tornadoes. But aren't tornadoes inland? I think a hurricane would suffice as a replacement for tornado.
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:icondirewolfwere:
DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah I live right next to a lake and we get tornadoes sometimes, anyway sand isn't always on beaches. It is more common for tornadoes to be inland though, but they do sometimes even go out onto the water.
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:iconlordofstupidity:
LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Huh. Thanks for clearing that up, then!
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what an intense fear of tornadoes will do to a person. haha. I know way more than I need to about them.
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:iconlordofstupidity:
LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
I wouldn't say I have an intense fear of tornadoes...More like I respect them for their destruction.
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Tornado-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think tornadoes are awesome!
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LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
I can tell from your username xD
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Tornado-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes I was and damn, you're brilliant. ;)
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goRillA-iNK Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
To write unforgettable poetry is a hard task to achieve.
I think you're getting closer.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
i must have read that last line 15 times now.
:hug:
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goRillA-iNK Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Aww... :tighthug:
You deserved to know.
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't tell you how much this speaks to me. Thank you for writing this :)
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DireWolfwere Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how you used tornado and scribbling, as if this person were full of energy and seemed like something big, but was really hardly anything. A scribble is something small and easy to forget. As if this person were big news while they were around, but then was easily forgotten when they left.
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fuzed-ice Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
"She's a footprint on the beach, and the tide's coming in" -The Doctor 
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LilDeby130 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
:D
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ReubenDeFlash Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Writer
thank god the tide washed you away
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