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i shudder
when you speak;
your words are
cold when they
touch me
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xXHawkkie13Xx Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And yet when you aren't talking to me,
I want you to.
I always have loved the cold.
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bootsnchaps Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
You shudder
when I speak;
Because
you want me to touch you
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Inevitably-dead Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love your writing. It is so powerful <3
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AnimeBVBFreak Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Reading your poems really makes me want to pick your brain.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
what about?
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AnimeBVBFreak Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just, your life story in general. Your poems make me curious about you.
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kirbyfight1 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
I really like it! Stronger emotional poems are able to convey a big message with only a few lines,
and this poem really touched me.
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anila73 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(you can heat them up and they'll stick to me warm, but they'll feel cold later)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
i swear to god your comments make my poems 120% better.
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LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
It's always the sarcasm that gets me
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