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he stood on the shore,
and told the sea he loved her;
the jealous wind tore his
voice in two
and she went out again, not knowing
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InvisibleSpider28 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
I love this. It's very beautiful, and realistic. :) 
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innoctemn Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
oh!!  this poem is so perfect! its so simple but a true love story if ive ever seen one:']
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bootsnchaps Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
She went out again, full well knowing

he stood on the shore,
and told the sea that he loved her;
the unloyal rip tide pulled it away
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014   Writer
I like two things in this poem. Firstly "... told the sea he loved her;" and "... jealous wind tore his voice ..." These parts are so full of emotions and metaphors. I like them very much.
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RoriWolf Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
I wrote a little thing based on this if you want to read it! roriwolf.deviantart.com/art/In…
Hope you like it! Xxxx
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TotallyUncreativeMe Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Reading the description straight afterwards, it just fits perfectly. I'm in awe :')
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iMerge Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
I really love this piece, it's flawless in it's simplicity. Really great. :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
thank you so much :tighthug:
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BlissBaby13 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh man, I really like this. Lovely. <3
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MixedSunlight Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Photographer
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