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love grew
and died repeatedly;
she tore it out at
the root
wild and
untame
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MimiRoseA Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014   Interface Designer
I love these little poetries!! :heart:
Its very inspiring, to me anyway, since my inspiration comes from lyrics.

Cant wait to read more!
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chinoise56 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
As always, you get right to the center of it with what seems like minimal effort and even less words, but brilliant it is. Bravo! :clap:
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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bootsnchaps Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Wild and
Untame
The heart of a stallion
Its not the same.

Did love grow and die repeatedly;
She gave no love
that was the root
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fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe, love is a weed. We keep uprooting it. And it keeps popping up :)
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anila73 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that reminds me of this qinni.deviantart.com/art/If-th…
which i really wish i could do
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lunar-glow Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
How do you come upwith these? :iconclappingplz:
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Did it persist despite her efforts, or was it cut out forever? 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
that's for her to decide.
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Are you saying that you have many lovers, and then end those relations whenever the affection dwindles, thus tearing it out from the root? Or are you saying that affection for one particular person has it's ups and downs, and you're tired of taking the rough with the smooth?


I would have thought that the time to 'tear it out by the roots', is when the lover is possessive and overwhelming, and is influencing you, one way or another, to end other ties with everyone other person you care and love- as such does the weed and the climbing/climbing/creeping ivy vines that choke and take over everything it comes to pass (the climbing ivy even rotting and breaking down walls). But, each to their own.

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XomegaXX Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Poetry is interpreted many ways, in my experience. It's  one of the beautiful things about it.
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keitone Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing.. once again and always :') 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
thank you :blushes:
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Personghost Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student Writer
Your poetries always fucking brilliant
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
:faint::heart:
thank you so much!
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WhyHi Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
cute
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LmonLimeCat Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Weeds should be removed, don't you think?
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student
Tend the seed you plant even before it blossoms and keep watch so it will sprout and grow. Do not lose hope, for it may become the most beautiful thing you will ever obtain.
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lux-ex-machina Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Your poems are always so affective and enjoyable, even when the subject matter is gloomy. It's like a little gift every time you submit one :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
aww thank you :giggle: :heart:
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful work as always <3
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
thank you so much :rose:
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Morticia-Lynne Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Writer
No problem :)
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honeyOdew Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
i'm glad you like it :hug::heart:
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ProudTortoise Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Oh okay.
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