Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
February 8
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
2,304
Favourites
344 (who?)
Comments
53
×
i dug up the
past again, those
memories vicious
and snarling

i set them loose
inside the house
and now we have
to leave
6th time lucky
(this makes me laugh too)
Add a Comment:
 
:icondarksack100:
darksack100 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
This made me laugh


Then I regreted it because that probably makes me a bad person.
Reply
:iconroshiray:
Roshiray Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
whoah! this is powefull stuffI think I've fainted. 
Reply
:iconnuminousnocturne:
NuminousNocturne Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is a brutal metaphor. An excellent poem but a brutal metaphor.
Reply
:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Professional Writer
This is very potent.
Reply
:iconamenarae:
Amenarae Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is A nice piece, and it reminded me of one I wrote some time ago. Would you read it? It's not long.
Reply
:iconrentintent:
rentintent Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I wish we could lock them up inside the house, then leave the house forever...
Reply
:iconkaleidoscopic365:
Kaleidoscopic365 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Once Upon a Time, there was a short story called 'Casa Tomada', about an unseen force that took over a house...do you think memories are what a house- or a person- contains?
Reply
:iconamenarae:
Amenarae Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If I could favorite this comment, I would.
Reply
:iconkaleidoscopic365:
Kaleidoscopic365 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Haha, why? :D
Reply
:iconamenarae:
Amenarae Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Because it is fabulous~
Reply
Add a Comment: