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sometimes
the voice
in my head
decides to
curl up in
my throat
instead

and sometimes
the beat of
your heart
decides to
make itself
known through
your fists
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Wiztch Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This defined me right now.
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retransmission Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Traditional Artist
Beautiful poetry!
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CyanMask Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
well... this is not the right page to post this comment.
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
you can say that again
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CyanMask Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
sure complaining is really just informing others of what you thing is wrong, but sometimes what you think is wrong is really not that bad. it's okay to insult people. it's not polite but it is normal so... meh. slapping anyone's butt will earn you a punch, slap to the face or any other form of, let's call it Quick Term Prosecution. the way individuals see you is not important. fuck individuals, they are sluts anyway. the way society sees you is something else and sometimes should be changed, buuuut if something is accepted by society, everyone will think it's fine and they wont change it anyway. at least not just overnight.

but even if most people dislike you, and even if you dont want anyone to like you, somehow someone will.
so i guess i'm sorry. i'm sorry you dont always like what people think, i'm sorry you feel like complaining about it and most of all, i'm sorry for rain.
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
you are a goddess that has caused emotion to be felt by a man who burned his own soul. thank you.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
i have a certain love for this comment, and
i think it will stick with me for a long time, if not
forever
:heart:
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
thank you. your poetry has really helped me and has inspired me. I would be honored if you took a look at some of my own poetry and left your opinion on them :)  
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really strong. It can be hard to understand how someone feels when they choose the most destructive ways to show it.
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blubbityblub Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do you know how important you are? Do you know that with 29 words you inspire waves of emotion that most novels struggle to elicit a whisper of. Do you know that you make people smile, and cry, and you lift them up and you tell them "I understand" with every piece you put out? i want you to be okay. No, not okay, you don't deserve 'okay'. You deserve 'happy, 'content', 'safe', 'loved'. Do you know that the most important, the most wonderful people create beautiful things, and you've created a beautiful thing right here. You are more than your flaws, more than your demons, more than your bad days, more than your wonderful, powerful poems.

Please stay strong. Keep your head up.
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