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i offered salt to the
sea, heat to the sun, and
love to the moon; they
told me, this isn't enough

i offered my soul to
the devil; he said yes,
this will be just fine
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MizzTusspot Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, simply.
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:iconmizu-hi:

Oh dear, your offer to nature is underpriced, your offer to devil is overpriced

But then again, I’m no bargaining master either

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Shriss Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

I like the poem.


Good job!

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haphazardmelody Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's always easiest to take the wrong path. And it's damn unfair.
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:iconcederlina:
Haha, I love this.
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fableweaver55 Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't even deal with this. This is just fantastic. You tell tiny little stories in those poems of yours.
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:iconoaklungs:
you are far too kind with those comments of yours ;)
but seriously, thank you :thanks:
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Golden-Leaves Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant. Left me with a cold feeling in my heart.
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:iconoaklungs:
oh i hope it wasn't too cold :hug:
(thank you so much)
:heart:
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Golden-Leaves Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, no. :)
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