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you are a walking
coffin; there are sentences
buried alive inside you, all the
things you could not say

and they will fester there
like maggots, eat you from
the inside out
you get the hammer, i'll get the nails
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1110Soulite Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
I like to think its also the same with things you have said
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
yes, i think you're right
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Amenarae Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I actually feel this way a lot.
This is marvelous!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
thank you so much!
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TheNascentBottleCap Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
I love this. 
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Cederlina Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Amazing!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
thank you :heart:
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ZeldaVoorhees Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can feel every bite they take.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
:cling:
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Hong-Kong-Kitty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You've described in seven lines a feeling I couldn't describe with a thousand words. And you did it with such amazing depth. Well done :D
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