you are a walking
coffin; there are sentences
buried alive inside you, all the
things you could not say
and they will fester there
like maggots, eat you from
the inside out
you get the hammer, i'll get the nails
Your writing never fails to impress and inspire me... Reminds me of a song called read all about it.
I like to think its also the same with things you have said
I actually feel this way a lot.
This is marvelous!
I love this.
I can feel every bite they take.
You've described in seven lines a feeling I couldn't describe with a thousand words. And you did it with such amazing depth. Well done
Well said….just…well said, my friend.
It amazes me that you can make such an impact with so few words. Great job, as always
That is me in two verses I never defend myself because I'm scared to start chaos, especially since I have roommates right now. It sucks .
the opening line draws the reader in. great images throughout. very haunting. good job
simply put. very good.
So very true, indeed; and most often, these things go with us into our own coffin.
well, yeah. our bodies are just carcasses carrying us around. you only get one body. and then you die and that's that.
Couldn't agree more.
True sentiment. I regret not fighting people more than I do not saying things though.
i like it. obviously a lot of others do too. cool shit, bro.
Well aren't you just a cheery sort.
By far one of my favorites from you
I am sending this to a fellow novelist!
Dayum. So good
The imagery in itself gives chills! The concept in itself is so brilliantly simple, it's terrifying.
I have a very difficult time expressing my feelings out loud. I feel this poem.
Beautifully constructed and great sentiment. Love this.
That is deep....
Poetic and haunting