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throw my bones
on the fire just
to warm up your
own

then sit
there and wonder
why you're always
alone
is it a habit does
it run in your blood
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Norrolith Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. I would say the absence of punctuation is part of it's appeal.
The imagery is good too.
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omnivore7 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
Impressive rawness....
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shewhoisadreamer Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Writer
I think someone's been plagiarising here: pogingbaasis.deviantart.com/ar…
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
thank you for letting me know! it looks like it's been deactivated though, i guess that's a good thing
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Aochiro Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student
:heart:
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PaleAuthor Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
yeah I think it runs in my blood. I don't really like it though :(
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Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
so your using other people for everything they have... its like a dog eat dog world hah ! i totally relate to that, and I like the rhyming it always gives it an extra taste ;)
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TheGoodWitch Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
I've known these words in action so well.  So many have I stood beside to offer a shoulder or hand to turn around and see my bones on that fire.  It makes me wonder where they are now, but indeed, many folks burn you as well as the ones that should matter away.  They are the ones who deserve to be alone.
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Inevitably-dead Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This one is by far my favorite out of all your writing. So good.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
thank you so much :thanks: i'm glad you like it! <3
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