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throw my bones
on the fire just
to warm up your
own

then sit
there and wonder
why you're always
alone
is it a habit does
it run in your blood
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QueenTiara 5 days ago  New member Student
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PaleAuthor Apr 3, 2014  New member Student Writer
yeah I think it runs in my blood. I don't really like it though :(
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Ricardo-Orozco Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
so your using other people for everything they have... its like a dog eat dog world hah ! i totally relate to that, and I like the rhyming it always gives it an extra taste ;)
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:iconthegoodwitch:
I've known these words in action so well.  So many have I stood beside to offer a shoulder or hand to turn around and see my bones on that fire.  It makes me wonder where they are now, but indeed, many folks burn you as well as the ones that should matter away.  They are the ones who deserve to be alone.
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Inevitably-dead Mar 3, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
This one is by far my favorite out of all your writing. So good.
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:iconoaklungs:
thank you so much :thanks: i'm glad you like it! <3
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haphazardmelody Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is just so sinister. And the rhyming really works; I don't usually care for rhyming.
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Golden-Leaves Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant.
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L-Inque Feb 14, 2014   Writer
fantastic imagery!
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