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when i look back at
the past, she looks  
right back at me

she points at the
future, glint in her eye
she's always gonna fuck things up
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you don't title your work.
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JocastaTheWeird Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel like 'she' is saying "Okay, so you messed me up. But you still have  a chance to do better up ahead."
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
that is a beautiful way of looking at it.
i love it :heart:
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JocastaTheWeird Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. 8'D Your poem is far more beautiful, though.
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creataire Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh, man. this is great.
you can bury her, but she always finds her way to the surface. 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
she does :nod:
(thank you)
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kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Brilliant, just brilliant my friend! I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. Heart 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
:blushes: thank you so so much!!
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kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! Well deserved indeed! :D :D :D 
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Chive-Turkey Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
*sigh* if I could bury the past beneath a radioactive mushroom cloud of DOOM I would...
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