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i was born with the
cord wrapped tight
around my neck; it
would seem fitting to
die the same way
getting more and more morbid by the day
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VerityRose Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. . .wow.
Morbid, as you say, but speaks in leagues and bounds (especially for people with these tendencies or past).

Uh. . .yeah. No words, really.
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Pinkiesdontswear Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
So deep.
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keitone Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
one of the dad's friend's son died the same way and he was supposed to be born just 2 days ago.. 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
that is terrible, i am so so sorry :( :rose:
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keitone Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yea..it is really sad.. he was born with the umbilical cord wrapped around his neck... if the he was born just minutes earlier they may have been able to save him... 

This poem reminded me of Ernest Hemmingway's six word novel... with so few words you could both convey a really deep message that in itself tells a huge story.. 

Your poetry made me cry and laugh and I think its really really wonderful oaklungs! :') 
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Tobassinesia Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
My sister was born with hers wrapped around three times. :o I sure hope she won't die the same way though.
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ShackledKagamine Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not much of a dark person, but I quite liked this. Just try not to suffer too much, 'Kay?
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ordinary-monster Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
I read somewhere that often best of arts are created through suffering. On one hand it is unfortunate that such depths must be dwelled in, but on the other hand, otherwise there would be a lot less good reading to relate to...
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SkyChamber Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Spot on, Ordinary-monster!
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meldickinson Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
damn. this is very powerful. i love the imagery and the darkness of the poem. keep it up! and being morbid isnt a bad thing at all :meow:
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