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tiny heart drumming
in your chest, i can
hear you

red gravy pumping
in your veins, i can
smell you

you are such a fresh
meal, and i can almost
taste you
but you must dance
for me, yes, see how
easy it is?
push you around
with a flick of my
claw-
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SkeyeStorm Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Sounds like a predator hunting it's prey. Nice work!
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Vanshira Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
I hear a cat hunting.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
:nod:
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IndigoDragon456 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student General Artist
why am i imagining a turkey dinner? probably the "gravy" part...
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014   General Artist
i can almost envision coagulated blood on a platter. yum.
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thesoaringbutterfly Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, so dark and sensual.  This gives me chills.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
thank you so much ;)
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"red gravy pumping
in your veins, i can
smell you"

So brilliant.
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Vlairebelle Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This is strangely sensual to me... very nice!
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SkyChamber Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
:)
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